Some people just can’t handle the “usual” dosage of some meds. Which is why its often said that “doctors practice medicine, because it’s an inexact science.” Or words to that effect.
Tom won’t learn a lot from “his” paper if you are doing the tweaking. Just sayin’. (Shet mah mouf.)
Yeah, I know, but this was an emergency. He did the research, at least, and made sure the all the source citations were in order. I just did heavy editing, to save time.
On Monday, we'll start working on his next paper, and he'll have to do the paragraph-by-paragraph rewrite himself. This should motivate him to try writing better in the first place! He gets his information down, but the facts get buried in dependent clauses. A lot of my work was breaking one sentence into three and making sure each had a clear subject.
Hey, call me when you quit practicing and get it right, huh?