The big news here is that this post was on CBS' web site, apparently for some time.
The grammar and sentence structure could stand some improvement. I say that not to be petty or snobby, but because those on our side have an obligation to speak and write impeccably in order to maximize our clout in this debate.
Good piece, but, aside from the supposed prevalence of anti-black racism on Hawaii c. 1961, the author doesn’t give us more info than those of us following this matter diligently didn’t already know.
The big news here is that this post was on CBS’ web site, apparently for some time.
The grammar and sentence structure could stand some improvement. I say that not to be petty or snobby, but because those on our side have an obligation to speak and write impeccably in order to maximize our clout in this debate.
Yes, but those following diligently here are the very small exception -— I too put thought that being on the CBS site was the new and important part, and so put it up in the title.
I also thought the hospital comments interesting, and the locale comments interesting, perhaps providing some basis for further research.
Note my post above about local people in HI speaking pidgin. Even local born or raised haoles.