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To: 2ndDivisionVet
This article is proof that a thesaurus and a burning passion for Sarah Palin's political career, are not enough to stop a trainwreck. For example, take a gander at the first sentence:

While the small minded and intellectually shallow continue to wail away at Sarah Palin, others are delving into finding out more about she who is undoubtedly having a huge impact on the political scene.

It's a sumptuous feast of irony for the writer of this stream of dreck to paint others as "small minded and intellectually shallow."

1) It's "whale away."

2) "Delving into" and "finding out more about" are the same thing. Unless the author means to convey the idea that they're looking into look into....

"She who is undoubtedly having a huge impact on the political scene" makes her sound like a female version of Voldemort.

I've seen 6th grade girls write like this about boys they like.... it's embarrassing to see a grown-up do it.

24 posted on 12/05/2010 2:28:36 PM PST by r9etb
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To: r9etb
It's also embarrassing to see adult FReepers obsess so much over Palin threads that they form criticism tag-teams and go at it 24/7. Hard to determine what their motives might be, but I see it all the time.
26 posted on 12/05/2010 2:32:45 PM PST by 2ndDivisionVet (Re: Gov. Sarah Palin: Even the lion has to defend himself against flies. ~German Proverb)
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