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To: Reaganghost

Platitudes and oververbose obfuscation do not mask your failings.

Your sales method is poor--and is not backed up by any names, addresses, or personal integrity. You are all unknowns, and you are using the names of people who are well known but who have either no interest in you and your project or any interest in endorsing your efforts, or who are deceased.

I'll definitely follow the series, you can count on it.

And please--learn to be concise if you want your replies read.


126 posted on 11/09/2005 2:07:18 PM PST by Judith Anne (Thank you St. Jude for favors granted.)
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To: Judith Anne
Platitudes and oververbose obfuscation do not mask your failings.


128 posted on 11/09/2005 2:40:11 PM PST by Tijeras_Slim (Now that taglines are cool, I refuse to have one.)
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To: Judith Anne
"I'll definitely follow the series, you can count on it...And please--learn to be concise.."

Whether it is tentative interest or a veiled threat, we welcome you and your input. My training in medical writing and science required that no detail be omitted. The concept was that you never knew what small detail might trigger a major recognition in a reader, the aaha phenomenon. My wife has nagged me about my verboseness for more than forty years. I keep trying, but...

130 posted on 11/09/2005 3:22:25 PM PST by Reaganghost (Democrats are living proof that you can fool some of the people all of the time.)
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