Anoreth is good with dialogue and description, but her plots don't go anywhere! I'll have her read yours before I put it in the mail to Dad.
A lot of the plot in "Tabula Rasa" is just assumed. Certainly I glossed over all the human repercussions.
I just wanted to show that such an idea should be explored carefully, even by the writer!
And the ending was left quite open to interpretation! But it was a fun idea!