The analogy to red shift is also not sound scientifically, but as a lay explanation is fine. Don't ever confuse the two and forget DNA in living organisms propigated by reproduction over time is not the same as particles of light travelling in space.
Here is a better tree of life project.
Also, I am not sure if the text accompanying the post (10) is yours or from the project page in Arizona. eg, "Creationists are forever claiming that the evolutionary picture revealed by the evidentiary jigsaw puzzle is nothing more than the arbitrary result of our prejudices..."
Is this your writing or is it taken from the Arizona ToL project?
Thanks.
Mine. If I quote something, I always say so and give the source.