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Our National Anthem

Posted on 11/01/2008 12:31:14 PM PDT by easternsky

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This was written by my grandaughter, age 15. Enjoy reading.

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1 posted on 11/01/2008 12:31:14 PM PDT by easternsky
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To: easternsky

Not to nitpick, but it’s “o’er,” a contraction of over. Not “ore,” as in iron or copper.


2 posted on 11/01/2008 12:33:40 PM PDT by brewcrew
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To: easternsky
I'm all for keeping "The Star Spangled Banner", but if the anthem must change, I propose chuck Berry's "Living In the USA".

Oh well oh well I feel so good today
We just touched ground on an international runway
Jet-propelled back home from overseas to the USA

New York, Los Angeles
Oh how I yearn for you
Detroit, Chicago, Chattanooga, Baton Rouge
God I long to be at my home back in old St Lou

Did I miss the skyscrapers
Did I miss the long freeway
From the coast of California
To the shores of the Delaware Bay
You can bet your life I did
Till I got back to the USA

Looking hard for a drive-in
Searching for a corner cafe
Where hamburgers sizzle on an open grill night and day
Yeah, and the jukebox jumping with records back in the USA

I'm so glad I'm living in the USA
Yes I'm so glad I'm living in the USA
Anything you want we got it right here in the USA

Ah we're so glad we're living in the USA
Yes we're so glad we're living in the USA
Anything you want we got it right here in the USA
3 posted on 11/01/2008 12:38:37 PM PDT by GodBlessRonaldReagan (Wakka-ding-hoy - battle cry of the Plexus Rangers!)
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To: brewcrew
this is a beautiful story and so it deserves paragraphs!

O're the land of the free and the home of the brave.” This, if you don’t already know, is the last line in the “Star-Spangled Banner” our national anthem. Looking at this line, you can feel the pride and excitement that Francis Scott Key must have felt while penning these words. Now many Americans want to change our national anthem to a different song.

I believe our anthem should remain the same, because it tells a story about our past that should never be forgotten. One of the most common arguments is that “it is too hard to sing.” The Star-Spangled Banner has a one and one half octave range, that many people could not clearly hit. Most of the time though, someone else is singing it, and the song is not in their key.

They say we should change it to “God Bless America” or “America the Beautiful.” Both songs are patriotic, but neither have the impact that the words of the “Star-Spangled Banner” have. Take, for instance, verse two and the last few stanzas. “Now it catches the gleam of the mornings first beam, In full glory reflected now shines in the stream, Tis the Star-Spangled Banner! O long may it wave, Ore the land of the free and the home of the brave.”

When you think of what Francis S. Key was looking at when writing these verses, does it really matter if you can sing the song without faults? Others have said it is “gibberish with a bunch of question marks.” I don’t agree! If you look at the words and read them knowing what Francis Scott Key was going through, watching, and thinking about, you would come to appreciate this song.

When Francis S. Key penned these words it was after the twenty-four hour bombardment of Fort McHenry in the war of 1812. All day the battle raged and at twilight the flag was still there. Could you imagine how you would have felt, watching the battle from a ship, wondering of your country’s flag would still be raised above all others in the morning?

The second verse tells of his anticipation and hope that the flag would still be there when dawn broke the darkness. You see, the song is not “gibberish” if you read it from the beginning to the end, it is a story. A great one at that!

One more argument that people have is the “lyrics are too war-like.” War-like?!?! I can’t believe someone would have the nerve to even say that. America exists because of war! If the early Americans had not declared their independence form England, and had not been willing to go to war, America would not be here today. I ask you, if you think the words of this song are to war-like, tell it to the “families” who lost their loved ones in Pearl Harbor, Omaha Beach, Iwo Jima, and Vietnam. Tell it to the people who have lost family members at “9-11’, say it to the faces of our soldiers in Iraq who couldn’t come home for Christmas and will not be able to come home for months!

America has fought for “her” freedom and now people want to change the United States National Anthem because it is too war-like. What is this country coming to?!?!

I stated only a few reasons of why we should keep the Star-Spangled Banner as our national anthem. I am sure that with a little more research I could and would find even more things and reasons of why we should keep our national anthem the same. I couldn’t imagine telling someone who had lost a loved one to a battle overseas or even our own country that our national anthem has been changed because it had too many war-like terms in it.

As for it being too hard to sing, forget about how you sound, let your pride and vanity go for a second, and sing the words with the respect they deserve. The last few lines, in the fourth verse of the Star-Spangled Banner, sum up my feelings on this subject better that anything I could say or write. “ Then conquer we must, when our cause it is just, And this be out motto “In God is out trust.” And the Star-Spangled Banner in triumph shall wave, Ore the land of the free and the home of the brave.”

I firmly believe that the Star-Spangled Banner should remain our National Anthem because it reminds us of our history as Americans! May we never forget what made us a nation to be proud of, and let our memories from past defeat and triumph direct us toward out future. A future where the Star-Spangled Banner remains Americas National Anthem!

4 posted on 11/01/2008 12:41:25 PM PDT by Wonderama Mama (Socialism is great until you run out of someone elses money - Margaret Thatcher)
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To: easternsky

Let’s Hope this won’t be the new national anthem:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jvxiG56M-eU


5 posted on 11/01/2008 12:43:21 PM PDT by garjog (Used to be liberals were just people to disagree with. Now they are a threat to our existence.)
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To: brewcrew
Her bad. Probably because she is just a dumb home school kid, or the okie from her grandpa coming out in her. :-)
6 posted on 11/01/2008 12:43:25 PM PDT by easternsky
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To: Wonderama Mama

This is not her fault it is the posters fault. :-)


7 posted on 11/01/2008 12:45:37 PM PDT by easternsky
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To: easternsky
Here's the flag Key was writing about:

It was a very big flag

8 posted on 11/01/2008 12:46:19 PM PDT by ZGuy
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To: easternsky

We have gone from being the land of the free and the home of the brave to being the land of the managed and the home of the frightened.

I cannot believe that so many Americans are willing to sell their birthright of freedom for a bowl of government porridge.


9 posted on 11/01/2008 12:48:20 PM PDT by Maceman (If you're not getting a tax cut, you're getting a pay cut.)
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To: Maceman

You’re exactly right.

The anthem should not reflect Top-40 style popularity but an unchanging commitment to “When free mean shall stand”.

Those who say that the song “doesn’t work” and is too “difficult” just don’t get it.


10 posted on 11/01/2008 12:54:29 PM PDT by Monterrosa-24 (...even more American than a French bikini and a Russian AK-47.)
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To: easternsky

This was my best shot at singing the song. I call it....

“The Star Spangled Banner Country Style”

http://gloriajane.podomatic.com/player/web/2008-11-01T13_04_22-07_00


11 posted on 11/01/2008 1:10:43 PM PDT by GloriaJane (http://www.download.com/gloriajane)
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To: easternsky

so what exactly, would the new one be, Obama’s little diddy of a song about change..... I think being a former Marine, that we should make the new one the Marine Corps Hymn.... But in all honesty it shouldn’t be changed what so ever, it was written due to a war on freedom and that is exactly what it stands for. The true heart of an American and our blood shed on all the shores in all the world. I can’t even fathom what my freinds that I lost in Iraq would think about these people wanting to change our National Anthem. Look what this country is becoming...


12 posted on 11/01/2008 1:31:30 PM PDT by jleibyUSMC (America, Love her, Defend her, or Leave her......... Semper fi)
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To: GloriaJane
That was Beautiful,Thank you. Every-time I hear it my heart is overwhelmed and my eyes brimming with tears. I Love this Country and what it has stood for. Many nights on my knees lately for her,but I feel its needed at this time.
13 posted on 11/01/2008 1:39:05 PM PDT by easternsky
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To: easternsky
She did a great job, especially for one so young. She has more sense than half of those in Washington!

I would never want to see the National Anthem changed. The only change I would consider is one line that you often see around the military town in which I live on July 4th, Memorial Day, and Veterans Day. This is the “land of the free BECAUSE of the brave”.
14 posted on 11/01/2008 1:42:40 PM PDT by srmorton (Choose life!)
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To: Monterrosa-24

“Those who say that the song ‘doesn’t work’ and is too ‘difficult’ just don’t get it.”

I’m no musicologist, so I can’t explain my feelings very well, but I understand where the critics are coming from. Our national anthem doesn’t have the greatest melody. “God Bless America” and “My Country ‘Tis of Thee” are much simpler, and better, in my opinion. I do like the lyrics, though.


15 posted on 11/01/2008 1:43:22 PM PDT by Tublecane
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To: Monterrosa-24

I hasten to add that the melody to “My Country ‘Tis of Thee” is already another nation’s anthem, so that song’s out of the question. I’d be fine with it if we swapped “God Bless America,” but it’s probably best not to fix what’s not entirely broken.


16 posted on 11/01/2008 1:45:02 PM PDT by Tublecane
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To: easternsky
"Many nights on my knees lately for her,but I feel its needed at this time.

Me too. Asking God to give us a hand, put it on peoples hearts to vote McCain/Palin.

17 posted on 11/01/2008 1:58:34 PM PDT by GloriaJane (http://www.download.com/gloriajane)
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To: Tublecane

Yes, both GOD BLESS AMERICA and THE STAR SPANGLED BANNER have lyrics that Leftists can’t stand. Ha!


18 posted on 11/01/2008 2:04:28 PM PDT by Monterrosa-24 (...even more American than a French bikini and a Russian AK-47.)
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To: easternsky

I have sung non-professionally all my life; church and school choirs, festivals, even a few weddings.

I have sung the Star-Spangled Banner twice for events. It is WITHOUT A DOUBT the hardest song to sing correctly that I have ever done.

Having said that, I wouldn’t change it for all the gold in Fort Knox. Hearing the Marine Corps Chorus sing it will bring tears to the eyes of a battle-hardened vet.


19 posted on 11/01/2008 2:05:47 PM PDT by clee1 (We use 43 muscles to frown, 17 to smile, and 2 to pull a trigger. I'm lazy and I'm tired of smiling.)
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As a Texan and a grandfather, I'm moved by this rendition of the SSB:

Texas' "Cactus Cuties" (ages 8-13) sing The National Anthem...

20 posted on 11/01/2008 3:39:55 PM PDT by TXnMA (To anger a conservative, lie about him. To anger a liberal -- tell the truth...)
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