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To: BenLurkin
LOL

Park rangers located her body about 400 feet below where she was standing.

So her body was found standing 400 feet below?

Grammar Police:

Park rangers located her body about 400 feet below {from} where she was standing.

20 posted on 07/12/2016 9:57:27 AM PDT by PROCON (Americans First or Terrorists First - Choose in November)
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To: PROCON
Or 400 feet below where she had been standing.
28 posted on 07/12/2016 10:00:21 AM PDT by BenLurkin (The above is not a statement of fact. It is either satire or opinion. Or both.)
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To: PROCON

below from where she FELL


29 posted on 07/12/2016 10:00:59 AM PDT by Tennessee Nana
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To: PROCON
The problem is the verb tense. As written, the sentence implied that "(she was) standing" and "located (her body)" happened at the same time.

We might say, "About 400 feet below the point where she had been standing, park rangers located her body."

32 posted on 07/12/2016 10:01:47 AM PDT by Tax-chick ("Tell 'em that God's gonna cut 'em down." ~Johnny Cash)
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To: PROCON

“Park rangers located her body about 400 feet below where she was standing.

So her body was found standing 400 feet below?

Grammar Police:

Park rangers located her body about 400 feet below {from} where she was standing. “

Not to make light of this poor woman’s death, but my first thought that 400 feet below where she was standing would probably be the rock that supported the cliff she was standing on. Probably best to have just said “400 feet below” and been done with it.


38 posted on 07/12/2016 10:07:22 AM PDT by Pravious
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To: PROCON

Maybe she stuck the landing?


56 posted on 07/12/2016 10:21:26 AM PDT by mountn man (The Pleasure You Get From Life, Is Equal To The Attitude You Put Into It)
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