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Please forgive my poor attempt at poetry.

So long CHIEF, watch over us.

1 posted on 10/05/2001 1:17:44 PM PDT by Luis Gonzalez (Blue3711@aol.com)
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"CHIEF negotiator's funeral arrangements, time/place"

68 posted on 10/06/2001 8:38:50 AM PDT by Taxman
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To: Luis Gonzalez
"Please forgive my poor attempt at poetry."

Your humility is misplaced, my FRiend...great job. And please continue to include us whenever the Muse compels you to create poetry...as well as, of course, yer prose.

FReegards...MUD

69 posted on 10/06/2001 8:43:28 AM PDT by Mudboy Slim
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To: Luis Gonzalez
The poem is beautiful, the CHIEF also educated me on the tax issue, he will be sorely missed.
70 posted on 10/06/2001 8:51:44 AM PDT by jeremiah
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Luis, you are usually a very good writer. Sometimes you outdo yourself and create great work. However, this time you have surpassed even that and words fail me....
71 posted on 10/06/2001 9:07:34 AM PDT by DeSoto
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To: Luis Gonzalez
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72 posted on 10/06/2001 9:11:01 AM PDT by Jalapeno
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Nothing to forgive, son. That wasn't a poor attempt at all. Bless your good heart.

Edd

73 posted on 10/06/2001 9:11:46 AM PDT by Twodees
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Bump!
74 posted on 10/06/2001 9:14:52 AM PDT by webster
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Luis, what a beautiful tribute to a Marine who's heartfelt words touched each and everyone of us.

May you rest in peace, CHIEF!


Semper Fidelis,
Norb

75 posted on 10/06/2001 9:19:13 AM PDT by Norb2569
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To: Luis Gonzalez: Chief
See you on the other side, bro.

Semper Fi.

L

76 posted on 10/06/2001 9:32:05 AM PDT by Lurker
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To: Herb Meadows (aka CHIEF negotiator)
WALK ON, WARRIOR!

The Warriors' path ran through that valley
Where the shadows had no end--
Where the password was "My Brother!"--
Where the answer was "My Friend!"

Those who walked that path together,
For all eternity are bound
In a state of trust and friendship
That, nowhere else on earth is found!

For only those who walked there with us
Know the half of what we feel--
Know the ties that run between us,
Stronger than the finest steel!

I recall a savage summer
When young men grew old too fast;
Where every minute seemed eternal,
Where every breath might be our last;

Where they sowed us from the choppers
Like a farmer sowing grain--
(Still, in the hours after midnight,
Demons plant that field again!)

When the Midnight Madness takes us
Back to scenes from long ago,
There's a wide field strewn with bodies--
All with faces that we know!

There--- the mud and smoke and thunder--
--someone crying out in pain!
There-- the blood and sweat and heartache
---and we live it all again!

There-- the mountain and the graveyard--
There-- the paddy with its dikes;
There-- the land mines and the mortars
And the punji traps with spikes-

Where we fought long past exhaustion,
-- young men came and old men went--
Tired and tortured-- touched with madness--
Still we fought where we were sent.

It seems our youth was but a moment
And the years just slid away--
Suddenly we face the twilight,
Warped and wasted-- bent and gray!

Now, some are gathered 'round this bunker
In the shadows of the end,
Where the password is "My Brother!"
Where the answer is "My Friend!"

Where no one of us need ever
Stand another watch alone,
For there's a spirit here that bonds us-
Blood of blood and bone of bone!

Brother {Herb} --- someone tells me
That you've saddled up once more--
That you're walking point again
The way you always did before.


If I could I'd walk it for you--
(So would any man that's here!)
But, our orders were to "Hold Position!"
Though the reason's far from clear!


So, walk on, warrior! Keep a lookout
For long lost Brothers you might find;
Tell them all we'll meet at sunrise--
We're just a click or two behind!

Walk on, Warrior! Let us help you
Saddle up and load your gear--
With you up front as point man
We know there's nothing there to fear.

We must not waste a precious moment
On a tear-soaked, sad, "good-bye"--
Just let me take you by the shoulders--
Toe-to-toe and eye-to-eye--
And, we'll just say "So Long" like Brothers--
Walk on Warrior! (Hand Salute!) Semper Fi!

Copyright Doug Todd, Nov. 1998


egalght

Rest in Peace, Brother Herb. Semper Fi!

Neil E. Wright, D108718, RM2, USN (1969-1980)

Toward FREEDOM

77 posted on 10/06/2001 9:37:44 AM PDT by Neil E. Wright
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Thank you, Luis. You possess a wonderful gift that you generously share. I am grateful.
78 posted on 10/06/2001 9:38:06 AM PDT by NautiNurse
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To: Luis Gonzalez
A VERY sweet tribute, Luis...and as you can see, much appreciated by those who respected the CHIEF.

Fine job!

Thank you!

79 posted on 10/06/2001 9:45:10 AM PDT by Mercuria
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Luis, as always you have touched something in the core of me, of us. GOD bless you and thank you for this tribute to Chief.

I have to go buy more kleenex. Again, thank you.

80 posted on 10/06/2001 10:31:23 AM PDT by dixie sass
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To: Luis Gonzalez
bttt!! Thanks, JL
81 posted on 10/06/2001 11:54:01 AM PDT by lodwick
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To: Luis Gonzalez
A beautiful tribute, thank you.
82 posted on 10/06/2001 11:59:00 AM PDT by Syncro
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Truly beautiful, Luis. He'll be greatly and sorely missed by all who knew him - even if only by his posts which were, after all, just words ... but they certainly reflected the man!!!

"Words are just such tiny vessels
     you can hold them in your hand.

They don't always come out as you hope
     nor even as you planned.

And sometimes when a loved one
     answers eternity's call

They do no good and only mean
     my heart bleeds with you all! "

Just words ...

Little Willie was "The Worst President In American History".

83 posted on 10/06/2001 2:14:55 PM PDT by pigdog
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To: Luis Gonzalez
I can hardly type for the tears. Thank you so much.
86 posted on 01/21/2002 1:40:39 PM PST by In Chiefs Honor
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Please forgive my poor attempt at poetry.

Coulda been Robert Burns himself. Thanks, Luis.

Hail to the CHIEF.

89 posted on 01/22/2002 5:30:45 PM PST by IronJack
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To: Luis Gonzalez
Your attempt is beautiful, made even more so because it is of the heart. Thank you for sharing it with us! :)
90 posted on 01/22/2002 6:42:39 PM PST by MistyCA
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