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To: Jess Kitting
Can't they afford a proofreader over at Red State?

I really struggled with reading this article.

How about this run on sentence?

While Hillary was spewing lies about Libya being about to bring down genocide on it’s on people was highly disputed within the intelligence community because such an act would mobilize countries against Libya.

The author should have used "its own" instead of "it's on".

And this:

The opposition nwas made up mostly of

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I appreciate writer for sharing this, but it was horribly written.

30 posted on 01/30/2015 5:51:46 AM PST by Preachin' (I stand with many voters who will never vote for a pro abortion candidate.)
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To: Preachin'

Yep. How can we trust a reporter to accurately quote what someone said, when they can’t compose a sentence?


36 posted on 01/30/2015 6:20:47 AM PST by ecomcon
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To: Preachin'
it was horribly written

Well, for "starters" how about the opening line:

>> Top Pentagon officials and a? Denis (Dennis) Kucinich do (so?) distrusted ...

70 posted on 02/02/2015 9:20:19 PM PST by ROCKLOBSTER (Celebrate "Republicans Freed the Slaves Month")
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