To: dead
Well, here is one of his **brilliant** and **deep** poems...
Enjoy!
STONES
MET BY A LAKE NEAR THE SUN
YOUR MOUTH AND EYES, ARMS
AND LEGS, MELTED AS THOUGH
WE'D KNOWN EACH OTHER WELL
AND NEEDED ONLY REKINDLE
WARMTH OF THE FAMILIAR.
AS IF PATIENCE WERE REWARDED
AND NOW WE'D SHARE EVERYTHING.
AFTER THE FLOWER BATH
PETALS CAUGHT IN HAIR
ON THE DRAIN COVER.
HE MISSES HER.
CORSAGE SAVER
KEEPER
OF CHILDRENS ARTWORK,
WHOSE BLUE-HOLED FLESH
IS USED TO PARTING WITH SACRIFICES
TO BOYS TRIALS
AND MENS DESIRES,
AND WONDERS NOW
WHAT THERE WAS
TO BE AFRAID OF.
To: trajanus_red
Usually, one must peruse the scribblings in a high school yearbook to read poetry of such a caliber.
Thanks! It was absolutely everything I expected it to be.
21 posted on
01/12/2004 2:00:23 PM PST by
dead
(I've got my eye out for Mullah Omar.)
To: trajanus_red
LOL!!!!!!!!!!
That sounds like something someone would right for thier 8th grade girlfriend. Then she would tell all her friends how he's so deep and thoughtful.
32 posted on
01/12/2004 2:09:02 PM PST by
retrokitten
(She's a squirrel-squashin', deer-smackin' drivin' machine! Canyonero!)
To: trajanus_red
Huh?????
45 posted on
01/12/2004 2:22:25 PM PST by
richardtavor
(Pray for the peace of Jerusalem in the name of the G-d of Jacob)
To: trajanus_red
That's not a poem. That's clumsy prose awkwardly broken up.
71 posted on
01/12/2004 3:09:09 PM PST by
lepton
To: trajanus_red
HEY! Where's the warning to
strap yourself into a
Poetry Appreciation
Chair before
reading?
124 posted on
01/19/2004 8:52:19 PM PST by
SWake
("Estrada was savaged by liars and abandoned by cowards." Mark Davis, WBAP, 09/09/2003)
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