This article is barely coherent.
What happened?
She put a package onto the elevator, and...?
I wonder if she was one of Cortez’s profs.
“This article is barely coherent.”
I couldn’t agree more. Whatever happened to people that could write a coherent, sensible story? This is just a jumble of words with no structure, no logic, and zero continuity.
What’s not clear about it? /s
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“The lady was trying to put a package into the elevator, like that’s how we do it,” said Charmichael.
Police later removing a large and long brown box from the building. They moved it out front at first, leaning it on a mailbox and then took it away.
“Five feet in front of my door is the elevator so it’s very creepy,” said Foskit.
Indeed, its the low standards of journalism today. The write inconsistent and illogical garbage and don’t even ask the obvious questions
Here is the cause of death - how in the world is the connected to “a big box” and “elevator accident?”
Traumatic asphyxia, or Perthes’s syndrome, is a medical emergency caused by an intense compression of the thoracic cavity, causing venous back-flow from the right side of the heart into the veins of the neck and the brain
She was new to the apartment and elevator.
Maybe she pushed some button accidentally with the package while she was in harm’s way.
I could be a journalist. Making up stuff form 2500 miles away, while knowing absolutely nothing. But I did it anyway.
“Police later removing a large and long brown box from the building. They moved it out front at first, leaning it on a mailbox and then took it away.”
Who wrote this drivel? Author and editor are idiots.
I agree the article is a mess.
I used to write for TV news. What happens is you have a rough script usually hastily-assembled, and then you work it out with the video people and the newsreader and put it together. A lot of times the person or people doing the station website would just take our rough script and put it up on the web. That’s likely close to what happened here. I hope. :)
“She heard a woman in distress and tried to help her out as a neighbor”
“The lady was trying to put a package into the elevator, like that’s how we do it”
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Police later removing a large and long brown box from the building.”
It’s like listening to a Joe Biden speech.
Emergency crews flooded the area.......poor writing.
Who the HECK is writing these articles?
They OBVIOUSLY have never been reviewed by a proofreader, nor an editor!