Hey, thanks for making your novel available. It’s really good. About thirty pages into it and the set up is awesome.
Alas, your novel requires the reading comprehension of at least a primary school education (well, when literacy used to be a requirement).
Actually (don't laugh) you should put together a graphic novel/manga edition, and maybe even a video game too. Heck, I would be motivated to work on games again (currently right up there on the never again list along with insurance and gov't projects) for something like that.
Don’t know if this has been posted or is allowed to be posted.
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