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HELP: Is my english OK?

Posted on 12/06/2008 5:47:34 AM PST by pepe234

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To: SumProVita

We do have a lot of trolls. We long-time FReepers now tend to zot first and ask questions later. A newbie does have to come here with thick skin. However, this didn’t seem to fall into the category of trollish behavior.


21 posted on 12/06/2008 6:24:44 AM PST by Jemian
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To: incredulous joe

Me say you just flunked my sixth-grade grammar class.


22 posted on 12/06/2008 6:25:33 AM PST by Jemian
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To: Jemian

And I just flunked my weekly spelling test.

ellaborate = elaborate


23 posted on 12/06/2008 6:27:11 AM PST by Jemian
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To: pepe234

Hm...a bit suspicious here. The introduction from the poster is in broken English, but the introduction to the thesis is of much-higher quality. Fly in the ointment in my opinion.

pepe234: what is you native language?


24 posted on 12/06/2008 6:27:24 AM PST by DennisR (Look around - God gives countless, indisputable clues that He does, indeed, exist.)
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To: Jemian

I agree. I have also seen the activity of some fairly OBVIOUS trolls....but this seemed different. This may not be the best place to receive such help, but it IS true that many students are agonizing over final papers at this time.


25 posted on 12/06/2008 6:29:00 AM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo...Sum Pro Vita. (Modified DeCartes))
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To: DennisR

With the name *Pepe* it may be “el español.”


26 posted on 12/06/2008 6:30:59 AM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo...Sum Pro Vita. (Modified DeCartes))
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To: Jemian

The “thesis” looks like a cut and paste to me.


27 posted on 12/06/2008 6:31:13 AM PST by DJ MacWoW (Make yourselves sheep and the wolves will eat you. Ben Franklin)
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To: pepe234

what...the...hell...is...happening...to...this...site..?


28 posted on 12/06/2008 6:32:57 AM PST by thefactor (yes, as a matter of fact, i DID only read the excerpt)
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To: SumProVita

Ya’ think? I just think it is some troll trying to waste everyone’s time. Probaby a couple of DUers (takes two of them to think up anything) sitting in a small loft in New York yukking it up at how peope are actually responding to their cries for help. Liberals, of course, because liberals are always calling for help.


29 posted on 12/06/2008 6:33:12 AM PST by DennisR (Look around - God gives countless, indisputable clues that He does, indeed, exist.)
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To: SumProVita

Sum, Manduco, ergo Bumbulum.


30 posted on 12/06/2008 6:34:28 AM PST by shibumi (...so if it's organic, where are its organs?)
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To: thefactor
"what...the...hell...is...happening...to...this...site..?"

There is madness afoot. Rabid moose bites.
31 posted on 12/06/2008 6:37:43 AM PST by shibumi (...so if it's organic, where are its organs?)
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To: SumProVita; Jemian
Could anyone check my English? - Pepe Z Member since Dec 6 2008
32 posted on 12/06/2008 6:37:47 AM PST by DJ MacWoW (Make yourselves sheep and the wolves will eat you. Ben Franklin)
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To: pepe234

All of your thesis are belong to me!


33 posted on 12/06/2008 6:37:54 AM PST by cowboyway ("The beauty of the Second Amendment is you won't need it until they try to take it away"--Jefferson)
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To: pepe234; muir_redwoods
I would recommend you go with Muir_Redwoods edit and comments. His edit was about the same as the one I did.

I do paper editing of Masters and Doctoral papers quite often for ESL students at a local university. I don't seek out the work; its mostly referral by their professors.
Buena suerte'

p.s. - please ignore the rude comments. It was a tough election and some folks just aren't their usual polite self.
34 posted on 12/06/2008 6:40:23 AM PST by Tainan (Talk is cheap. Silence is golden. All I got is brass...lotsa brass.)
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To: DennisR

IF people try to honestly help, it is never a waste of time. In the long run, it is good. IF it was a post from a troll, in the long run, that person will receive justice as well.

Honest people also need help from time to time. I choose to give the benefit of the doubt until I have evidence to the contrary.


35 posted on 12/06/2008 6:41:34 AM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo...Sum Pro Vita. (Modified DeCartes))
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To: big'ol_freeper
Re: Why does no one do a thesis on the problem of canine dingle berries?

If you have to ask, big... you need way more than one beer!

36 posted on 12/06/2008 6:42:50 AM PST by Bender2 ("I've got a twisted sense of humor, and everything amuses me." RAH Beyond this Horizon)
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To: DJ MacWoW
The “thesis” looks like a cut and paste to me.

I've lectored, translated, and/or edited many a Master's Thesis or Doctoral Dissertation by students whose first language was not English. You mustn't imagine that such papers are written from scratch. Someone (was it Bierce?) compared it to transferring bones from one graveyard into another. So I wouldn't black-ball pepe on account of that (though the phrasing of his request for aid is piss-poor.)

On the other hand, I doubt that pepe will ever post an article or submit a comment with political content here at this site. I'd call his registering himself with FR yesterday merely in order to solicit this kind of advise is a blatant abuse of our hospitality. He's simply conveniencing himself at our expense. I'd much rather he go to DU and waste their time!

That he should solicit assistance from total strangers and even provide a chunk of his thesis where it will be preserved for all time is ludicrous.

This is not strictly trollish behavior, but it is borish behavior.

Regards,

37 posted on 12/06/2008 6:46:38 AM PST by alexander_busek
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To: pepe234

Pepe,
Your university probably has a service to help with this. Be sure to ask your advisor or your dean’s office for a recommendation.
Also some professional societies offer free editing services to grad students. Do you belong to any such society?
If you can afford it, you can always find a native english speaker to edit your manuscript for a couple dollars a page or less.


38 posted on 12/06/2008 6:47:43 AM PST by Kirkwood
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To: DJ MacWoW

Already aware of this....but ...thanks.


39 posted on 12/06/2008 6:47:57 AM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo...Sum Pro Vita. (Modified DeCartes))
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To: pepe234

Up Yours, Troll!

40 posted on 12/06/2008 6:50:23 AM PST by pabianice
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