Kinda Ramones-y thematically and with the C-Aminor-F-G progression. Fun song, great hook. Who plays what on this?
Very talented. Thank you. Please write about ethical subjects.
you got a unique sound- one of your songs sounded kinda like B-52’s rock lobster song-,didn’t care for taking God’s name in vain in the song you listed though- but the sound was fun, funky- stylistic- catchy tune-
Regards,
Perchance this occurred in downtown Baltimore?
It’s too strung out at 4+ min. A song like this should be done in 2:50. Put the track into an editor and see if you can manually cut the excess bars. For instance after the vocal intro>4 beats>verse. If doing it in an editor results in some choppy sounds use the result as a template and go back to the multimate track.
I’ve got 10 or 15 songs of my own that are the best of the God knows how many I’ve written. Some of them would have benifit ed from the above advice. Song writers can get real windy.
I listened through. I hear talent in music and a good voice but lack of emotion in voice, seemed monotone/just singing no feeling in what’s being sung.
The current wording seems to minimize subjects (real life situations) that are crimes. I just think there are many better subjects or ways to word that would be positive to the listener instead of just “feel so bad” or “sad” about committing armed holdup, robbery, etc.
Talented but could really be much more with a spark from God’s help for best usage of talents and inspiration for those involved in creation and those listening.
Hope you share a future song. I look forward to hearing it.
Thanks for posting this. I like to hear what other Freeper musicians have been up to.
I like your voice, reminds me of Curtis Salgado but needs more feeling. Thanks for posting.
I like it ! A good 60s pop feel flirting with punk. What about some dominant drum after “feel so bad” to go into the next verse? Think Ringo’s drumming in “Rain”. Yes a little shorter ... your Wa Wa at the end should be female backups ... lose it or throughout after “feel so sad” >>(Wah Wah Wah - he has sadz ...)
hilarious
Bttt.
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First, I know next to nothing about music. I just know when I like something. I liked this, nice sound, good voice. But, I bailed when it got repetitious.