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Piss Christ? Piss Koran!
Western Rifle Shooters Association ^ | June 6, 2016 | Matt Bracken

Posted on 06/06/2016 6:39:14 AM PDT by Travis McGee

Piss Christ? Piss Koran!

Part One: Dark Till Dawn

Mike Dolan came out of the subway, hit the sidewalk and set out down the west side of 6th Avenue with a purposeful stride. Midtown Manhattan never truly sleeps, particularly just before a Monday morning, but compared to what it would be like in a couple of hours, it was geared way down. No tourists yet, mostly delivery trucks and vans. All lanes were northbound, because it was 6th Avenue.

Mike was showered and clean shaven, every item on him and in his possession carefully considered. The white hard hat on his head was the real deal. He wore a gray polo shirt with the embroidered black-and-yellow logo of a crane manufacturer above the pocket. Both items were gifts from old friends. The black cargo-pocket work pants over his Red Wing construction boots were practically new. An iPhone in an armored carrier was clipped to the black nylon rigger’s belt on his right hip. A silver tape measure was next to a small black flashlight on his left. On his back was a compact but heavy pack, also black. In his right hand he carried a small black tool bag, and he held a folding aluminum clipboard case in his left. On the F-Train over from Queens, another early riser had gestured toward Mike’s hard hat, and asked him if the strike was over. Mike just mumbled something about safety inspectors never getting a day off.

After a career spent pounding bolts hanging the high steel, it felt strange for him to be wearing a white hard hat for his trip into Manhattan. The white hard hat and the crane-logo polo shirt were just a disguise for his mission. Like his father before him, Mike was a union man, from the time he got out of the Army, until he’d retired a few years earlier. The New York Ironworkers Local Union 461 had carried him all the way through his family-raising years. Now, the kids were gone, and his wife had passed away.

Mike had always worn a scuffed-to-hell red hard hat with an American flag sticker on the front. Shiny white hard hats were for management pukes way down in the trailers, and for inspectors and reporters and a few other random assholes who would occasionally make an appearance at nose-bleed height. Well, maybe they weren’t all assholes. Some of them were pretty cool, like the construction company honcho who had given him the white hard hat right off his head on the job site parking lot, and offered Mike a salaried position with his big and growing company. That was a line Mike Dolan couldn’t cross—he’d be a union man until the day he died—but it was a welcome gesture. And now that white hard hat was on his head.

After walking a few city blocks south from the subway entrance, the black edge of the forty-story BCA building became visible across the avenue. The BCA building was one of Mike’s two targets, but it was not his destination. The black granite tower was the national headquarters of the BCA television network, including the studios of BCA World News. Another block down 6th, and Mike passed in front of another impressive skyscraper, the fifty-story Grand Hotel. Cabs were waiting under the portico; it was the usual scene remembered from a thousand pre-dawn trips into the city. Hustlers, pimps and low-lifes of every stripe, who were just ending their nights, passed worker bees trudging the other way toward their daily grinds.

While he was approaching 53rd Street, Mike looked around and counted at least four cameras. It didn’t matter. He knew he’d been on film from the time he’d gotten onto the subway. If his mission succeeded, his identity would probably be out anyway. The guy on the F-Train who had asked him about the strike would be giving TV interviews by the twelve o’clock news. So what? It wouldn’t change anything.

The rest of Part One at the link.


TOPICS: Books/Literature; Religion; Society
KEYWORDS: bracken; islam; koran; sharia
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I have been working on this short story for a long time. It will come out in installments every few days.


1 posted on 06/06/2016 6:39:14 AM PDT by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee

Bump, thanks Matt.


2 posted on 06/06/2016 6:43:07 AM PDT by PROCON
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To: Eaker; afnamvet; AK2KX; Ancesthntr; An Old Man; APatientMan; ApesForEvolution; aragorn; archy; ...
This brand new short story, released in serial installments, is designed to draw a reaction from many directions and on several levels. It's been a work in progress for a long time. I hope that you will enjoy it, and that you will read each new part as they come out. If you like it, please share it.

I'd post it all here, but it has embedded photos, and it'll be easer just to go over to WRSA. The crane below will take you there.

Matt


3 posted on 06/06/2016 6:47:39 AM PDT by Travis McGee (www.EnemiesForeignAndDomestic.com)
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To: PROCON

—bflr-


4 posted on 06/06/2016 6:48:23 AM PDT by rellimpank (--don't believe anything the media or government says about firearms or explosives--)
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To: Travis McGee

Good on ya!


5 posted on 06/06/2016 7:22:40 AM PDT by Boowhoknew
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To: Travis McGee

Travis / Matt - I look forward to following this story series as it develops.
Your fine writing is appreciated by many.
BTW: glad to see your most recent story mentioned in a number of places.
Keep spreading the word about one of our greatest existential threats.

http://gatesofvienna.net/2016/01/the-alienork-way/


6 posted on 06/06/2016 7:26:46 AM PDT by MarchonDC09122009 (When is our next march on DC? When have we had enough?)
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To: Travis McGee

I was going to complain about most of the excerpt being about his attire, until I saw who posted it. Off to read the rest of it now.


7 posted on 06/06/2016 7:53:34 AM PDT by zeugma (Welcome to the "interesting times" you were warned about.)
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To: Travis McGee
Another brilliant piece, Matt.

the infowarrior

8 posted on 06/06/2016 7:58:35 AM PDT by infowarrior
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To: Travis McGee

I’m a bit disappointed, mate. The picture at the end of chapter 1 does not do the title justice. :(

Cheers.

A bit slow to begin with, but it got interesting further in.


9 posted on 06/06/2016 8:14:11 AM PDT by Utilizer (Bacon A'kbar! - In world today are only peaceful people, and the muzrims trying to kill them)
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To: Travis McGee

Matt, can you create a ping list for this as you release new installments?


10 posted on 06/06/2016 8:22:29 AM PDT by zeugma (Welcome to the "interesting times" you were warned about.)
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To: Travis McGee

Wow. I’ll be anxiously awaiting Part II!

L


11 posted on 06/06/2016 8:25:07 AM PDT by Lurker (Violence is rarely the answer. But when it is it is the only answer.)
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To: Travis McGee

May God guide and protect you, Matt.


12 posted on 06/06/2016 8:51:52 AM PDT by MeganC (The Republic of The United States of America: 7/4/1776 to 6/26/2015 R.I.P.)
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To: Utilizer

Don’t worry, it will be Manhattan Armageddon by the end of the four hours.


13 posted on 06/06/2016 8:56:04 AM PDT by Travis McGee (www.EnemiesForeignAndDomestic.com)
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To: zeugma

Sure thing.


14 posted on 06/06/2016 8:56:56 AM PDT by Travis McGee (www.EnemiesForeignAndDomestic.com)
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To: harpseal; TexasCowboy; nunya bidness; blackie; AAABEST; Travis McGee; Squantos; wku man; SLB; ...
RKBA-list ping for FR's own estimable Mattt Bracken.

Click the Gadsden flag for pro-gun resources!

15 posted on 06/06/2016 9:16:06 AM PDT by Joe Brower (The "American People" are no longer capable of self-governance.)
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To: Travis McGee
Meanwhile, back on the phone to my paper:

Betty, hold page one for a four-column pic, top of the fold, no cutline yet. The TV pukes have it live, but they may cut away from the lead. I've got my Nikkor 1200-1700mm f/5.6-8 on it on a tripod, once I've got the money shot I'll send it to you, and feed you updates if anything follows....

16 posted on 06/06/2016 9:19:32 AM PDT by archy (Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Except bears, they'll kill you a little, and eat you.)
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To: Travis McGee

Great lead in!


17 posted on 06/06/2016 9:20:04 AM PDT by Grampa Dave (Bill Kristallnacht wants to burn down the conservative movement & elect crooked/lying Clinton!)
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To: Travis McGee

Bump!

Great lead in!


18 posted on 06/06/2016 9:20:38 AM PDT by Grampa Dave (Bill Kristallnacht wants to burn down the conservative movement & elect crooked/lying Clinton!)
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To: Travis McGee

Outstanding, sir! Picked up your first installment over at WRSA. I love the way you think.


19 posted on 06/06/2016 9:32:18 AM PDT by Noumenon ("Objects in history may be closer than they appear")
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To: Travis McGee

With a proper Piss Korun, I would hope! :) *crosses fingers*

Cheers!


20 posted on 06/06/2016 9:53:09 AM PDT by Utilizer (Bacon A'kbar! - In world today are only peaceful people, and the muzrims trying to kill them)
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