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Police shoot dead gunman who took hostages in German cinema
Yahooooo!............ ^ | June 23, 2016 | by Madeline Chambers; Editing by Andrew Roche

Posted on 06/23/2016 8:54:57 AM PDT by Red Badger

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To: CaptainAmiigaf

Makes sense since all Oz immigrants were from the UK so they kept some of the accent. I’m sure other UK colonies contributed people to Oz which change it some but not all. Then there’s NZ.


41 posted on 06/23/2016 9:56:20 AM PDT by SkyDancer ("They Say That Nobody's Perfect But Yet Here I Am")
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To: Cicero

“Police Shoot Gunman Dead. . . .”

That certainly makes things clearer.................... Why not, “Shoot Dead the gunman they did”?


42 posted on 06/23/2016 10:08:53 AM PDT by Bringbackthedraft (HILLARY 2016 - SERIOUSLY? What are they thinking?)
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To: Red Badger

There’s a new trend in copyediting to move the second part of the verb back to the first part if words lie in between. It’s not colloquial, or vernacular, and the author usually has it right, but the copyeditor moves it. Maybe it’s in some style book somewhere, maybe the same style book that says adjectives that follow the verb shouldn’t be hyphenated.

When I proofread, I always change them back so that it sounds like English—with a question mark, of course.


44 posted on 06/23/2016 10:16:25 AM PDT by firebrand
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To: CaptainAmiigaf

They get lots of jollies over the word “gotten.” You have to watch that novelists don’t have Brits using that word.


45 posted on 06/23/2016 10:21:19 AM PDT by firebrand
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To: Red Badger

No witnesses silly.

This was yet another Vast Right Wing Conspiracy action meant to distract attention from Hillary’s plan to fix the economy.


46 posted on 06/23/2016 10:23:10 AM PDT by Justa
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To: firebrand

Everybody has pet peeves, when it comes to English grammar.
Mine is “The Case of the Wandering Onlies”.......................


47 posted on 06/23/2016 10:23:32 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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To: Red Badger

But Fowler says we shouldn’t be pedantic about the use of “only.” It doesn’t always have to appear right before what it modifies. Sometimes its appearance earlier in the sentence aids comprehension—in other words, we know what’s coming as soon as we see it.

She only picked the fruit that was ripe, versus She picked only the fruit that was ripe. Both are grammatically acceptable, but the first one is colloquial/vernacular and so it flows better.


48 posted on 06/23/2016 10:29:15 AM PDT by firebrand
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To: firebrand

Like I said, personal pet peeve, mine only.............B^)


49 posted on 06/23/2016 10:31:39 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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To: Red Badger

GSG 9?


50 posted on 06/23/2016 10:38:40 AM PDT by grimalkin (Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm. - Winston Churchill)
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To: firebrand
She only picked the fruit that was ripe...

Although it's grammatically acceptable in the vernacular or spoken language, his could be confusing to a foreign listener.

1. It could mean that 'She' was the 'only' picker of the fruit.

2. It could mean that She 'only picked the fruit' and did nothing else to the fruit, like eat, cook or sell it.

Whereas the second sentence would not be confusing, suggesting that the fruit she picked was the ripe ones in particular......................

51 posted on 06/23/2016 10:38:43 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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To: Red Badger

Not yours only. A lot of copyeditors move it around to its “logical” place.


52 posted on 06/23/2016 3:50:11 PM PDT by firebrand
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To: Red Badger

It’s only confusing if you start checking out every possible meaning. If you do that, everything can be confusing. Foreign readers have a hard time with English. It’s a tough language to really know.

In nonfiction, you can be more logical and precise. In fiction, you don’t want anything to bring the reader up short and hamper his enjoyment. The more it sounds like the English you hear around you, the easier it is to understand.

Even my friend the script doctor doesn’t have the ear that I do. It takes a deep, focused caring about the reader and a reluctance to go pedantic on him.

Of course there’s British fiction, and there you have to trust the author almost completely. We don’t REALLY know how they talk the way a Brit does.


53 posted on 06/23/2016 3:59:20 PM PDT by firebrand
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To: Red Badger
I saved this headline. Lakeland (FL) Ledger.


54 posted on 06/24/2016 4:27:38 AM PDT by Road Warrior ‘04 (Molon Labe! (Oathkeeper))
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To: Bushbacker1

LOL!..................


55 posted on 06/24/2016 6:12:27 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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To: firebrand

I’ve read Jane Austin and Charles Dickens and didn’t have a problem.
I read a modern British crime/mystery novel and there were so many idioms in it that I had to look up stuff just to know what they were saying...........................


56 posted on 06/24/2016 6:16:15 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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To: firebrand
A lot of copyeditors move it around to its “logical” place.

Only the educated ones.......................B^)

57 posted on 06/24/2016 6:18:26 AM PDT by Red Badger (Make America AMERICA again!.........................)
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