Some others have no problem comprehending what is presented. That means the failure is yours, and that of other dense/lazy “readers.”
That fact that a few people are able to piece your puzzle together doesn’t mean that you haven’t given us a puzzle. I read your excerpt and saw nothing there that supported your headline. It wasn’t until I read Bogey78O’s nutshell summary that I understood the meaning of all this.
Communication is an art, and not everyone has the knack for it.