I had no problem with it. Yes the ‘on’ was not edited out. BFD. If you had any contribution 1/100 that of Nathan Bedford here at FR then maybe you could have standing. Go suck on another lemon.
The writing style is arcane - is it schtick? He uses a plethora of ten letter words, run on sentences and poorly constructed logic to make a minor point...Obolas Czars are more like Soviet Commissar’s than Czars...if that passes for deep thought here on FR then have at it.