What is not working for me is the angle of his head in the shower, which can not be reflecting his face. Is there someone else in the shower with him>
Being the art snob that I am, I have to admit there’s some potential there. I find the shower one very interesting. The shadowing, the placement of the figure, the color choice. There’s something that’s working, and I can’t quite put my finger on it.
What is not working for me is the angle of his head in the shower, which can not be reflecting his face. Is there someone else in the shower with him>
Not awful, but any commerical value would be attached to the name, and not the merit of the art.