How to make it better.
Spelling.
Second sentence of Paragraph 2 — “dissent” not “decent”. This one really threw me. I thought there was a noun missing after “decent”.
Third sentence of Paragraph 5 - “easily disapproved” should be “easily disproved”.
Otherwise, a good job, and a good length. You avoid the common flaw of going on to long.
You mean “too long”. Or were you addressing somebody named Long?