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To: Chainmail
The Lancastria was the largest loss of life from a single engagement in World War Two and is also the largest loss of life in British maritime history - greater than the Titanic and Lusitania combined.

The wording can be taken either way, but I get your point.

4 posted on 06/13/2015 7:41:30 AM PDT by Tijeras_Slim
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To: Tijeras_Slim

The horrors of that war are hard to comprehend.


5 posted on 06/13/2015 7:42:44 AM PDT by Chainmail (A simple rule of life: if you can be blamed, you're responsible.)
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To: Tijeras_Slim
The wording can be taken either way, but I get your point.

Indeed, the wording is quite ambiguous. Better:

The sinking of the Lancastria resulted in the largest loss of human life from a single military engagement during WW II...

[I am supposing that the taking of Iwo Jima and the bombings of Hamburg - or of Hiroshima or of Nagasaki - are not considered "engagements" by the author - maybe he means "naval engagement".]

...Further, it resulted in the largest loss of life ever in the whole of British maritime history.

I suspect that that is what the author meant to say.

In any event, any sentence that - even after three re-readings - still leaves room for doubt is an example of poor writing.

Regards,

27 posted on 06/13/2015 10:20:31 AM PDT by alexander_busek (Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)
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