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To: HomerBohn
Top Pentagon officials and a Denis Kucinich do distrusted Hillary Clinton as Secretary of State, they opened their own dialogue with the Libyan regime.

Huh?

Can't they afford a proofreader over at Red State?

5 posted on 01/30/2015 4:45:13 AM PST by Jess Kitting
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To: Jess Kitting

I was ‘troubled’ by that too, but had to post the article as it was published.

(I detest the word ‘troubled’ which is used over and over again by the weasels in Congress and in the evil regime.)


12 posted on 01/30/2015 4:53:06 AM PST by HomerBohn (God is just, but his justice cannot sleep forever!)
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To: Jess Kitting
Can't they afford a proofreader over at Red State?

I really struggled with reading this article.

How about this run on sentence?

While Hillary was spewing lies about Libya being about to bring down genocide on it’s on people was highly disputed within the intelligence community because such an act would mobilize countries against Libya.

The author should have used "its own" instead of "it's on".

And this:

The opposition nwas made up mostly of

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I appreciate writer for sharing this, but it was horribly written.

30 posted on 01/30/2015 5:51:46 AM PST by Preachin' (I stand with many voters who will never vote for a pro abortion candidate.)
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To: Jess Kitting

It should read “SO mistrusted” in the first sentence, not do.


39 posted on 01/30/2015 6:37:04 AM PST by 2harddrive
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To: Jess Kitting

This is a horribly written article. Full of incomplete sentences and sentences that don’t make any sense.

Redstate should have a red face over this one.


42 posted on 01/30/2015 6:41:11 AM PST by upchuck (Entrenched incumbency is the disease. Fresh blood is the cure.)
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To: Jess Kitting

I didn’t read the article because of that opening sentence. That’s like fingernails on a chalkboard. I may try again later.


52 posted on 01/30/2015 8:05:31 AM PST by houeto (https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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