[Usagi_yo]

Would read much much better without the crass colloquialisms such as mooselimbs, mooselips and gummit.

History and current events are on the pieces side. Adding those distractions diminishes the pieces impact and casts a shadow over it’s veracity and therefore it’s conclusions.

[ROCKLOBSTER]

Thank you for your thoughtful, detailed, and unsolicited criticism...

Now...SKA-REW!