I’m a high school English teacher and I concur. “may have outdid,” lol. It’s a nice, juicy run-on sentence.
We still actually have English teachers in high schools?
This comment is from a grandmother who still diagrams sentences when reading. And is able to spell, write and speak in complete sentences in spite of surviving grades 4-8 in a two-room schoolhouse. Two teachers with two grades each, plus 2 bathrooms. And horror of horrors, our 7-8th grade teacher was Jewish and we actually sang Christmas carols from a tiny booklet.
All of us could benefit from a good editor looking over our shoulders.
Rationality still lives... who-da-thunk...