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To: Jim Robinson

I know nothing about any of this, but I must say it reads like it was written by someone who never got past Junior High School.

With any site personalities are going to come out. Geeez, get over it.


29 posted on 07/10/2012 3:18:18 AM PDT by TalBlack ( Evil doesn't have a day job.)
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To: TalBlack
someone who never got past Junior High School.

Actually, if he turned this essay into me, a sixth grade English teacher, I would give him a 0. Every sentence must have a subject and a predicate. It must be a complete thought, able to stand on its own. One sentence fragment dooms the whole paper. The writer of this screed has more than one dependent clause pretending to be a thought.

I'll leave others to judge the content.

46 posted on 07/10/2012 3:47:56 AM PDT by Jemian
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