Bad idea. If the law is general, the details will be filled in by federal regulations written by executive agencies.
See my post at #6. It illustrates what this person means.
The way it is written, this bill is only a little bit shorter than “Atlas Shrugged”. As I show, it can be written in something closer to real English.
Granted, even in real English it is still double-speak with details unfilled that will torture us, but it would be a start.