edit: This is a video I did a while back.
Maybe if you put some good music.....nope, nevermind.
How about if you showed the American flag.......scratch that.
Why don't you highlight our military.......ahhhh ..........just forget it.
"I would appreciate some advice on how to make it better."
You already got better than 4 1/2 out of 5 stars from over 4500 people seeing your video. I think that's a pretty good comment on your effort already.
P.S. I enjoyed it "as is". Thanks for sharing.