Agree.
If I may make a friendly suggestion....that nice report would have been much easier and more pleasant to read if it had been broken into two or more paragraphs.
In a huge block of copy like that it’s difficult to move down line-by-line without losing one’s place, skipping lines, etc.....at least, for an old codger like me.
That was how he wrote it. The break for the next paragraph was coming up but I only can go to 300 words. I almost never change something from how the author presented it.