[Lazamataz]

This is my first attempt at a science fiction novel. I'm looking for honest feedback. Be savage, be complimentary, be funny, but above all, be geniune.

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[StAntKnee]

Be happy to help. I’ve some expertise as author of several how-to references for Writer’s Digest. Published fiction at several legacy houses like Dell, Penguin, and Berkley. I’ve been a newspaper editor and magazine editor and worked at major papers, including the Dallas Morning News.

In return, you’d visit my “sometimes-funny, sometimes-disturbing” Substack novel and comment occasionally AND fire off the occasional ping to your list to recommend it. (I don’t want “honest feedback.” I want praise. And I need for everybody on your Ping list to further recommend to at least half a dozen others on social media.)

I could remark publicly in posts here to inspire discussion among our learned colleagues. Or go private. Your call.

Deal?

[spel_grammer_an_punct_polise]

"and they made their way back to the Escalade."

[spel_grammer_an_punct_polise]

"he saw several armed soldiers guarding the entrance to the elevator to the scaffolding" ( ? )

[spel_grammer_an_punct_polise]

"and extremely gifted mathematician in his own right."

[spel_grammer_an_punct_polise]

Seems like you simply wanted someone to proofread your novel. ;-)

"pointing to an open door that let d to a corridor of rooms"