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To: AAABEST
Juze usually aren’t that good at fist-fights - so I’m surprised you’d start Jason and Mark in one.

This scene definitely seems out of place, but it has an expositional purpose... one you will discover many more chapters into the novel.

11 posted on 03/05/2024 5:45:15 AM PST by Lazamataz (Laz 2005: "First, we beat the Soviet Union. Then we became them.")
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To: Lazamataz

Just messin’ with ya Laz.

If you like feedback, you’re at your best when you write funny.

I STILL laugh, to this day, whenever I even think about “AlGoreWhacky” or “I’m Staying.”


19 posted on 03/05/2024 6:05:06 AM PST by AAABEST (That time Washington DC became a corrupted, existential threat to us all...)
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