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A writer I respect told me I should concentrate on writing fiction more than opinion editorials. He said I should focus on what I appear to do best. This is a short little sci-fi story I whipped up tonight. Let me know if you like it.
1 posted on 01/13/2024 6:09:42 PM PST by Lazamataz
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To: null and void

Let me know what you think.


2 posted on 01/13/2024 6:10:16 PM PST by Lazamataz (Laz 2005: "First, we beat the Soviet Union. Then we became them.")
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👍😎...........................


3 posted on 01/13/2024 6:13:22 PM PST by Red Badger (Homeless veterans camp in the streets while illegal aliens are put up in hotels.....................)
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To: Lazamataz

Well done.


4 posted on 01/13/2024 6:13:53 PM PST by BenLurkin (The above is not a statement of fact. It is either opinion, or satire, or both.)
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So when’s the steamy sex part?


10 posted on 01/13/2024 6:17:23 PM PST by Bullish (...And just like that, I was dropped from the ping-list)
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To: Lazamataz

Well done!


12 posted on 01/13/2024 6:21:07 PM PST by woofer2425
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A quick little short story I whipped up tonight.

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14 posted on 01/13/2024 6:22:38 PM PST by Lazamataz (Laz 2005: "First, we beat the Soviet Union. Then we became them.")
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Let me know when the novel comes out


17 posted on 01/13/2024 6:25:51 PM PST by doorgunner69 (When tyranny becomes law, rebellion becomes duty)
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To: Lazamataz

I like it.


18 posted on 01/13/2024 6:27:00 PM PST by null and void (I identify as a conspiracy theorist. My personal pronouns are told/you/so.)
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I like it!


20 posted on 01/13/2024 6:27:58 PM PST by wjcsux (On 3/14/1883 Karl Marx gave humanity his best gift, he died. )
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To: Lazamataz

Sturgeon’s law didn’t apply to this one. :)


24 posted on 01/13/2024 6:28:47 PM PST by Tijeras_Slim
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To: Lazamataz

Interesting. Please submit a report in about 24,000 years.


25 posted on 01/13/2024 6:29:19 PM PST by Jim Robinson (Resistance to tyranny is obedience to God.)
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Please, continue.


26 posted on 01/13/2024 6:29:34 PM PST by fretzer
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It’s excellent. All your writing I’ve seen is enjoyable to read. You are gifted and special, Laz!!


27 posted on 01/13/2024 6:30:05 PM PST by ViLaLuz (2 Chronicles 7:14)
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To: Lazamataz

I dig it, expand out.


29 posted on 01/13/2024 6:30:56 PM PST by EEGator
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Excellent Cameo of science fiction.Your scene could be the start of a movie where Thar'ruuck travels back in time to earth where almost all of the men have died and the earth had bec0ke populated with women.

Thar'ruuck , a very good man :



31 posted on 01/13/2024 6:32:12 PM PST by Candor7 (Ask not for whom Trump Trolls,He trolls for thee!)<img src="" width=500</img>,<a href="">tag</a>)
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I *like* - just wanted to read more!


33 posted on 01/13/2024 6:32:58 PM PST by piytar (Do NOT forget Ashli Babbit!)
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To: Lazamataz

Not bad at all. I’d like to read more.

L


34 posted on 01/13/2024 6:33:16 PM PST by Lurker ( Peaceful coexistence with the Left is not possible. Stop pretending that it is. )
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I ran this through my ChatGPT program and it thinks you may have plagiarized some of his writings for this. I wouldn’t pay too much attention to him, he lies and has some jealousy traits.


37 posted on 01/13/2024 6:43:56 PM PST by BipolarBob (My investment choice for 2024 is pre-ban menthol cigarettes. )
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Forgot to add you to the ping list.

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39 posted on 01/13/2024 6:47:51 PM PST by Lazamataz (Laz 2005: "First, we beat the Soviet Union. Then we became them.")
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It has the potential to be very very true.


40 posted on 01/13/2024 6:49:52 PM PST by telescope115 (I NEED MY SPACE!!! 🔭)
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