Posted on 09/30/2017 12:07:00 PM PDT by mairdie
Military and love poetry from Major Bradley Van Deusen (1905-1952), Major Henry Livingston's fourth great grandson.
And after learning about poetry from Vassar Prof Don Foster, I went back and found a newspaper column in which my father courted my mother through poetry. Studying Major Henry had taught me more than I realized as I fought my way through father's pseudonyms. And then, after working with U of Auckland Prof Mac Jackson, I found one of father's two books, and then poetry he'd published in Leatherneck.
So I bless Henry for finding me a father I never knew. From the page linked above of some of my favorites of father's poetry:
Convent of the Guns
Grey stars agleam in a blank, dead sky
Grey guns agrowl below.
Grey clad men out beyond the wire.
Grey fields in the star-shells glow.
The barrage is a pounding symphony
That ears attuned cannot hear
There's something flicking the parapet
There's something above you fear!
Not fear of "stopping one" above,
Or fear for the man beside.
There's something flicking the parapet
There's a fear that you cannot hide.
"Stand By!" The rifle is cool in your hand
And your heart pounds hard and quick.
There's something flicking the parapet
Number Three of the squad is sick.
The rifle hurts the palm of your hand
Like gripping a stiff wire brush
There's something flicking the parapet
"Walk slow through the wire, then rush!"
The whistle! The ladders! Up over the edge!
And your legs seem stiff and sore.
There's something flicking the parapet
Number Three is sick no more!
Grey stars agleam in a blank dead sky
Grey guns agrowl below.
Grey faces turned to the glowing stars
Where men lie dead in a row.
Wow! The way he kept repeating the line about the parapet and the fear really built up the anxious feeling. I’m not much for poetry - mostly because I think they try to get too fancy and I can’t understand what they are talking about.
With this I could understand and FEEL what he was talking about. And his clever use of the color grey. Thanks!
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