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To: fr1

True or not, this is an interesting story.

You are a FANTASTIC writer.

Do ten or twenty more of these stories and you’ve got a book. This was super short for a short story but all the elements of a great story are there. I love brevity.
This was really good. I’m a short story lover, and this is right up there.


5 posted on 07/18/2015 12:13:46 AM PDT by Auntie Mame (Fear not tomorrow. God is already there.)
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To: Auntie Mame

Hey, thanks. It really did happen that way. When I tell the story, I have time to include more details. But that’s the gist of the story. Limited to how much I can stand typing.

For 3 days after that incident, my adrenaline was running. Cops must go through some rough times.


6 posted on 07/18/2015 12:17:29 AM PDT by fr1 (Donald Trump is Joe the Plumber with 10 Billion dollars)
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To: Auntie Mame

Let’s see... I have a true story about my encounter with a serial killer (apparently I lived to tell about it), and a few about living down the street from one who became among the greatest baseball players in history when we were kids.

I will take your advice into consideration.


7 posted on 07/18/2015 12:27:36 AM PDT by fr1 (Donald Trump is Joe the Plumber with 10 Billion dollars)
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To: Auntie Mame

I hear Kramer on sienfeld is looming for some new stories.


11 posted on 07/18/2015 3:48:21 AM PDT by driftdiver (I could eat it raw, but why do that when I have a fire.)
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