After reading this flyer, some kids have more to worry about than kneeling at school.
D- for the parent that wrote this.
After reading this flyer, some kids have more to worry about than kneeling at school.
D- for the parent that wrote this.
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Really?
So, the parent took the time to actively campaign against this, and you are saying that this parent is somehow stupid because his message wasn’t perfect and the kids should be worried about this parent instead.
Would you have even taken the time to do this? I doubt it. You would have done nothing. You probably would not have even realized it was happening.
If it makes you feel any better then the odds are that a disgruntled teacher put that poster together.
D- ? Let’s examine together #1. There was a mistake with the word Administration, spelling it AdminiSTARTion.
#2. There was inarticulate and opaque use of the general pronoun in second sentence; “THEY have to wait until THEY are excused by THEM.....”
#3. This sentence continued, becoming a Run On Sentence....”to return to class from lunch and recess.”
So in the fury of the moment, this parent produced a few boldly expressed, though inartfully constructed remarks. I wouldn’t say that was a D minus, but, maybe I’ve missed some things. I am glad the parent was caring enough to ring the bell and bring it to public attention.