[Excellence]

I see a figure with an arm upraised? I would put it on the cover, but not subsequent panels, as the point has been made. Otherwise, I think it’s brilliant.

[OneWingedShark]

I see a figure with an arm upraised? I would put it on the cover, but not subsequent panels, as the point has been made.

Hm, don't you think it would be a little bare w/o some background image/watermark? (There's really very little on the graphic-intensity scale, which is good… but I'm concerned that w/o something it'd be a bit bare.)

Otherwise, I think it’s brilliant.

Thank you very much.