Pretty good if you ask me. Quite catchy. Nice vocal, lots of nice guitar fills. Drums sounded like they needed to be compressed more. Guitar solo was a little too metal I thought. It should have been more pop. But overall good.
Thanks for your input. Just for fun, here are 2 more songs by the same songwriter. If you comment, please refer to the name of the song since there are now more than one.
If You Let Me
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gz-pGDCrbI8
Ocean Blue
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upjPjkWW6IQ