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Please review my game for me
itch.io ^ | 11/3/2023 | for-q-clinton

Posted on 11/03/2023 8:49:32 PM PDT by for-q-clinton

So I recently retired from the air force and I'm just looking to keep busy and keep my brain learning.

I created a mobile game that you can try on itcho.io. I'll soon be releasing it on the app stores (iphone and android). I'd love your feedback on what you think.

Is the music for each mode appropriate? Is it fun? Are the modes distinct and interesting enough to try each one?

You can try the game here: https://schlista.itch.io/kabocha


TOPICS: Business/Economy; Computers/Internet; Military/Veterans
KEYWORDS: cleverfreeper; fun; games; happyretirement; mobile; retirement; thankyou
Once again, thank you for reading this and any feedback is appreciated (even constructive negative feedback).
1 posted on 11/03/2023 8:49:32 PM PDT by for-q-clinton
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To: for-q-clinton

It didn’t do the linky thing...so let me try again:

https://schlista.itch.io/kabocha


2 posted on 11/03/2023 8:50:11 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: for-q-clinton

I got ~15000 points in casual mode.

I have no idea what the goal is.


3 posted on 11/03/2023 9:02:19 PM PDT by E. Pluribus Unum (The worst thing about censorship is █████ ██ ████ ████████ █ ███████ ████. FJB.)
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To: for-q-clinton

The music, veggies, player/missile graphics, and bag seem good, but it is unclear what makes veggies “pop” and disappear and if I want that to happen. Your green pumpkins should be called butternut squashes or chayotes.

I don’t get what gets you to a bigger pumpkin, but garlics and peppers seem to make occasional zucchinis. Some combination makes an ear of corn, but that goes away, too.

In sum, I just don’t understand just about everything about the game, but it’s pleasant, even though veggies pop like bubbles and the bag never seems to fill.


4 posted on 11/03/2023 9:04:49 PM PDT by ConservativeMind (Trump: Befuddling Democrats, Republicans, and the Media for the benefit of the US and all mankind.)
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To: E. Pluribus Unum

First goal is to get to a pumpkin. 2nd goal is to get to a giant pumpkin.


5 posted on 11/03/2023 9:13:27 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: ConservativeMind

Those are supposed to be green peppers, but you’re the second person to call them green pumpkins. Which is understandable as kabocha are greenish orange japanese pumpkins.


6 posted on 11/03/2023 9:14:32 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: ConservativeMind

great feedback. I was assuming everyone understood the “watermelon game” so your feedback is critical to me in providing better direction.

Basically if you combine two veggies of the same time they form the next veggie in the chain (as seen on the graphic to the right with the arrow pointing down).

Overall goal is to get at least one pumpkin, bonus goal is two pumpkins combining.

Once again thank you for the feedback.


7 posted on 11/03/2023 9:16:49 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: for-q-clinton

almost 30k in casual. I had a couple of instances where like kinds hit, but it was in the middle of a bunch of other “transitions” happening, and this particular transition was “missed”. (I had 2 garlics hit and rebound from each other, and not join).

Also, this might violate the purity of the gameplay, but I had “3 peppers” hit a couple of times, and the fact that it only joined 2 of them was kind of a bummer.

Overall though? VERY FUN! Simple to understand, and fun to play. At about 10k points I thought “MAN this music is repetitive!” by 25k points I was whistling it.


8 posted on 11/03/2023 11:01:49 PM PDT by FrankRizzo890
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To: FrankRizzo890

Thank you so much for the feedback. Yes it only combines two a at a time.


9 posted on 11/03/2023 11:08:20 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: for-q-clinton

If there are no raccoons, turtles or mushrooms, I ain’t playing.


10 posted on 11/04/2023 1:08:16 AM PDT by Larry Lucido (Donate! Don't just post clickbait!)
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To: for-q-clinton

Sorry, I have a strict no app policy.

GL


11 posted on 11/04/2023 1:19:19 AM PDT by Bullish (...And just like that, I was dropped from the ping-list)
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To: for-q-clinton

The music is appropriate. The goal needs to be clearer.

Also, do you just use the back arrow to exit the game or is there another way.

Good luck with it.


12 posted on 11/04/2023 2:19:13 AM PDT by Baldwin77 (Be not deceived, God is not mocked)
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To: for-q-clinton

Oh, and thank you for your service to our country !!


13 posted on 11/04/2023 2:19:51 AM PDT by Baldwin77 (Be not deceived, God is not mocked)
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To: for-q-clinton

I have found it to be very entertaining. Well done. I have garnered the eggplants, but no further. I could play forever if possible... it seems to time out...

There should be an option for paper or plastic... just kidding


14 posted on 11/04/2023 4:23:09 AM PDT by teeman8r (Armageddon won't be pretty, but it's not like it's the end of the world or something )
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To: for-q-clinton

casual 51k+


15 posted on 11/04/2023 8:17:50 AM PDT by PIF (They came for me and mine ... now its your turn)
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To: teeman8r

“ There should be an option for paper or plastic... just kidding”
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For players from Maryland there will need to be a 5 cent charge per bag for those who choose plastic.


16 posted on 11/04/2023 4:46:21 PM PDT by House Atreides (I’m now ULTRA-MAGA. -PRO-MA)
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To: PIF

I just changed scoring mode on casual. Now it only tracks the # of pumpkins you make.

Challenge mode has the standard scoring, but if a veggie falls out of the bag it’s game over.

Thank you very much for playing and replying.


17 posted on 11/04/2023 8:10:34 PM PDT by for-q-clinton (Cancel Culture IS fascism...Let's start calling it that!)
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To: House Atreides

Hehehe.


18 posted on 11/05/2023 7:32:43 AM PST by teeman8r (Armageddon won't be pretty, but it's not like it's the end of the world or something )
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