Hip, Hip, Hooray!
It is a good rant but you might want to cut down on the commas.
But don’t feel bad: the comma is the most overused and least understood punctuation mark in the English language.
Let's not forget *hair relaxers* are racist1
**As someone who used hair relaxers for six to seven years, I see them as another way to belittle black women. Sure, relaxers are going out of style, but many women continue to use them because there's still a stigma that African American hair is "not professional.**
NB author's name....ESTHER SHITTU