I think it’s a good start, but you may want to do a little more research to tie in CRA, Acorn and several other components that led to this mess. I know you probably have limited space and the audience may have limited attention spans, but at least place in some links:). Best of luck
You are right - I am addressing people who are generally high school aged, with a few in college like myself. Really I’m afraid of being too detailed, and that they will get bored. This is just my first post; I can make as many blog entires as I want in the future if I think I should go into specifics.