Well, isn't that just too snazzy? The author begins the article with something that is not even a sentence.
Is this the best jourinalist skools can offer?
"They had eaten there way all the way to the top, had run out of food, and they couldn't move over because it was too cold,"
Check out this sentence: ""They had eaten there way all the way to the top,"
I hear pretty soon, computers will be writing news stories, soon, anyway.
Can you imagine, writing and spelling will all be done by a computer, just like a calculator does everything more than the most basic addition and subtraction for the vast majority of the populace? You can just speak, and eventually, that won't be necessary, either. You'll have a program to make decisions for you...