[Rome2000]

But his record alone is the type of record of someone who gets into an Ivy League school irrespective of race.

Did you actually read the "essay"?

Do you realize that he was number ELEVEN in his graduating class from a mediocre High School?

[Kit cat]

I am NO brainiac however this essay received admission to ALL Ivy
Leagues WE are in DEEP DOGGIE DOO DOO! This is a shame that
this work is considered exemplary!!! Our kids are being dumbed down
and NOW common core will definitely finish the job!!!!