That looks pretty good. Just about any hood or goggles I wore allowed at least a little glimpse of the outside if you cocked your head just right. That is why I never felt truly confident flying in actual IFR. In actual IFR you cannot cheat, its the real deal. If I were to take IFR training again I would take the training in the winter when actual IFR is common. My training was in the summer.
My instructor thought is was fun to “play in the fog.” He was good and an example of how confident one can get with sufficient experience. Eventually you beat back your inherent tendency to believe your middle ear but it takes time, and the amount of time varies with the individual.