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To: 2ndDivisionVet

The 4th line of the 10th paragraph should read “Obama’s presidency”, not “Bush’s presidency”. Proof-reading should have included cutting the length in half and organizing the meandering facts.


3 posted on 07/12/2012 11:29:12 PM PDT by Praxeologue
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To: Kennard; 2ndDivisionVet
The 4th line of the 10th paragraph should read “Obama’s presidency”, not “Bush’s presidency”. Proof-reading should have included cutting the length in half and organizing the meandering facts.

From the last paragraph on Page-2:

"Obama says we tried the Bush tax cuts for "the rich" and they didn't work. So let's review how exactly they did work out. Bush cut the top income tax rate by 11.6%, from 39.6% to 35%,. ."

Should have been 1.6% there.

That said, the length didn't really bother me. I found the article quite enlightening.

Thanks for posting, 2ndDV

5 posted on 07/13/2012 2:01:08 AM PDT by Flotsam_Jetsome (If America were a car, the "Check President" light would be on.)
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