04/15/2024 8:08:43 PM PDT
· 36 of 65 deks
to AFB-XYZ; goodnesswins; ransomnote
Proton has no affiliation with the WEF whatsoever. We simply won an award given out by them to various startups once: https://t.co/SeNwOCh5De, and have since been featured on their website.—
04/14/2024 3:16:07 AM PDT
· 4 of 5 deks
to Nextrush
Hey, Nextrush, don't be afraid to use standard punctuation. It makes it much easier to read and understand your writing.
Not this...
Marxist-Leninist thinking was in the heart of one of those hires she did tell stories about her university one indicating sexual misconduct by one of her teachers there.
Like this...voilà!
Marxist-Leninist thinking was in the heart of one of those hires. She did tell stories about her university, one indicating sexual misconduct by one of her teachers there.
04/12/2024 9:08:17 PM PDT
· 3 of 5 deks
to Nextrush
re: “Newsdump Friday”
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Hey, Nextrush, I believe you could save space and eliminate “Newsdump”, which is not a particularly attractive term (take a dump), and also the word “Friday” which is stated twice in the title.
04/11/2024 10:21:34 PM PDT
· 2 of 6 deks
to Nextrush
Hey, Nextrush, I noticed that one of your headlines is lacking information. I will elaborate.
A billionaire Vietnamese property owner sentenced to death...
What is lacking in it?
<>sentenced...the name of the person <>sentenced...by whom <>sentenced...WHY??
A thought: instead of taking your time to paraphrase the news item, maybe just copy the best headline you can find for that item. For example, the following headline tells who, by whom, and why, and even includes a colon!
Vietnam Sentences Real Estate Tycoon Truong My Lan To Death In Its Largest-Ever Fraud Case: Massive Fraud Amounting To 3% Of GDP