This isn't a "Bible-thumper's" critique; it's all about writing -- and I'd expect much better out of a high school composition class. I wish I was a better writer. :-)
Thanks for your posts and I especially enjoyed that analysis. Do you write?
Do I write? Mostly only in this forum! Seriously, I'd love to do more there, but there's this thing about supporting my family that kinda gets in the way of those modest ambitions!
My thanks and another BTTT for your efforts here. Cheers.