[HonkyTonkMan]

The shot man, Dajuan Robinson, 36, had bought the gun on the train and whipped it out during his attack on a stranger, who shot Robinson in the head as the pair wrestled over it.

Journalists, please, use, commas, sparingly.

[Magic Fingers]

“Journalists, please, use, commas, sparingly.”

They must have studied punctuation at the same school as certain, Freepers, who predictably use a, ton, of commas, often and in, inappropriate places and usually throw in, several incorrect use’s of, possessive pronoun’s.

[RedMonqey]

“the shot man” should be “the man shot”