[AndyJackson]

Kinda dumb to criticize someone's education with such twisted syntax.

What is wrong with the syntax? Perhaps I misunderstood in thinking I understood. Why don't you rewrite the sentance for us according to your view of how it should be written.

[EternalVigilance]

Well, I'll do it, with the understanding that I don't agree with Pat's premise, or the spirit it was offered in, sure:

Pat's version: "Unfortunately for President Bush, while he has a good heart, he was horribly miseducated at Harvard."

Revision: "While President Bush has a good heart, he was obviously horribly miseducated at Harvard."