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To: Tolerance Sucks Rocks
In it, the 82-year-old maintained his innocence from his Pennsylvania correctional institution, Phoenix, which is located outside Philadelphia, and, because of that, he expects to serve the entire sentence.

He expects to serve the entire sentence because he maintained his innocence or because he's in a prison outside Philadelphia? Who writes this stuff??

9 posted on 11/27/2019 8:46:00 PM PST by PistolPaknMama
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To: PistolPaknMama
In it, the 82-year-old maintained his innocence from his Pennsylvania correctional institution, Phoenix, which is located outside Philadelphia, and, because of that, he expects to serve the entire sentence.

He expects to serve the entire sentence because he maintained his innocence or because he's in a prison outside Philadelphia? Who writes this stuff??

In it, the 82-year-old (from his Pennsylvania correctional institution, Phoenix - located outside Philadelphia), maintained his innocence and because of that, he expects to serve the entire sentence.

Who writes this sort of stuff? People with no love for the English language!

I would have shifted the entire parenthetical remark to a separate sentence, but wanted to show that a minimal change would have been sufficient to correct the problem.

Regards,

12 posted on 11/27/2019 9:01:15 PM PST by alexander_busek (Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)
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