Some great writing:
Police say the person of interest is a male who knew the female who was killed in the original double homicide at the West Ambler Johnston Hall dormitory. Flinchum also said he is not a student and that he knew the female who was killed in the original double homicide.
I think what happened is that in the first shooting the police immediately began barking up the wrong tree.
Sounds very much that way, to me.
But did they have to bark up the wrong tree so long? Were things THAT . . . unclear? Weren’t ANY of their spider senses tingling? Weren’t any of the clues seeming out of place? Still seems like too many puzzle pieces aren’t fitting near snuggly enough.
I tend to agree.